Intermediate Package: PSAS & Edits
Transform your personal statement into an unforgettable narrative with my all-in-one bundle. The Intermediate Package combines a robust foundation with in-depth editing to ensure your story captures attention and stands out. Here's what you’ll get:
1. Personal Statement Amplification Series (PSAS)
- A 3-hour, self-paced course that sets the groundwork for your success.
- Say goodbye to guesswork—this course helps you build a rock-solid foundation, saving time and ensuring your personal statement is structured and impactful.
2. Two In-Depth Personal Statement Edits
- Extensive Feedback: Most applicants receive 10+ pages of detailed edits per session, refining every element of their statement for maximum emotional impact and narrative strength.
- Line-by-Line Precision: Every sentence is meticulously reviewed to enhance flow, tone, and meaning, bringing out the best version of your story.
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Tailored for All Applicants: Whether English is your first language or not, my process is designed to meet your unique needs. In just two edits, most applicants achieve a polished, standout personal statement.
Why Choose the Intermediate Package?
This package is your all-in-one solution to crafting a standout personal statement. By combining the foundational strategies of the PSAS with my personalized, expert edits, you’ll save time, money, and stress while creating a statement that admissions committees won’t just read—they’ll remember.
The PSAS lays the groundwork, but my hands-on edits are the finishing touch that transforms your story into a compelling masterpiece. Together, we’ll craft a personal statement that positions you as an unforgettable candidate.
Ready to stand out? Let’s make it happen!

Alejandro here!
I'm on a full-ride scholarship to my DREAM medical school, and I want to help you achieve that too!
With the proven principles of the Personal Statement Amplification Series (a 3-hour, self-paced course) and my personalized edits, your personal statement will stand out as EXEMPLARY. I'm here to guide you every step of the way.
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Frequently Asked Questions 🧐
What if I need more than two edits?
It’s extremely rare for applicants to need more than two edits after completing the PSAS and working through my feedback. However, if additional edits are required, there’s a $49 fee per edit.
What is the character limit for sending my personal statement (PS)?
6,000 characters, including spaces. This gives you an additional 700 characters beyond the AMCAS limit to ensure your story is fully developed before trimming it down.
What is the turnaround time?
Because my edits are incredibly thorough, often exceeding 10 single-spaced pages of detailed feedback, I require 1 days to complete them.
Can I purchase now and use the service later?
Absolutely! There’s no expiration date on my services. In fact, I recommend securing your purchase now since my prices continue to rise as I add more value to the process.
What if I just want the edits?
The PSAS E-course is the foundation for your edits—it’s where you’ll learn the core strategies and framework for crafting your personal statement. Without it, we’ll be speaking entirely different languages, and you won’t get the full benefit of your two edits.
Think of it this way: skipping the PSAS is like trying to build a house without a blueprint. Even if you bring in a skilled architect (me) to refine it, the result won’t be as strong because the foundation wasn’t properly planned. By starting with the PSAS, we ensure we’re working from the same blueprint, optimizing every single edit for maximum impact.